E-portfolio sample- Science Term 1

Passion Project Term 1

E-portfolio-knowledge sample

My goal is to order decimals to 3 decimal places

Reflection:

1. I am getting better at using different strategies to work out problems.
2. Working in groups with people of a different level to me.
3. I think I need to work on practicing more and recalling my decimal and basic multiplication facts

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E-Portfolio Writing - Camp Experience

Describe It - Camp Experiences


Learning Objectives:

Level 3
Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.
Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.

Level 4
Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.
Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.

Learning goals:
To ‘Show, Don’t Tell’ the reader by painting a picture with words.
A variety of sentence starters
A variety of sentence lengths
Edit and rework
Effective peer checking and feedback

The sun was boiling out in the dry bushes full of prickles everyone was sweating heavily when someone goes off again 'how long till we get there , he asked in frustration 'only five more minutes and we'll be there the instructor says, those were the most longest most scorching hot five minutes of the trip. Finally the group was there, "here we are the instructor echoed across the valleys, i looked up away from my soggy shoes buried in the hot crystallised dirt full of stones, when we gazed at the most beautiful sight, the crystal green water shined back at our faces, the children smiled they threw their clothes off due to the fact they had togs underneath, sprinting towards the glistening water, children leaped into the pure cold water, h20 bubbles orbed upwards towards the surface still under the water I took soe time to think, how lucky i am.

Student Reflection:
In my writing, one of my goals is to attempt complex punctuation
I did use one of these goals because I used two sentences with complex punctuation

In my writing, one of my goals is to use different sentence beginnings and lengths
I did use this goal in my writing.

My next step is to use paragraphs with a topic sentence and supporting detail.

Teacher Comment: Soph, sounds like it was a long walk! You've used some powerful adjectives in this piece of writing to describe what you experienced. Make sure you use the right structure and layout for the task next time. This was a moment in time.

Term 1 Passion Project

Our World - Geology

weelkly reflections week 9

Week 9 Reflection 
 What is something you are proud of or have found interesting in your learning recently? 
 - something i have found fun and interesting was our writing for the past 2 weeks, the two stories we have been writing about were...  Ruin, 23 degrees 5 mins. 


  What is something you need to work on in your learning and why?
 - my measuring, weighing, mass, width, length, in maths I am not the best at mesuring becausei find it confusing.
 Our Tōtara goal has been Responding Appropriately, what does this mean to you?
 - responding appropriatly is a good skill to have, this could influence your future in getting jobs and such.  

 How can you show Responding Appropriately?
 - Example-  mrs Hunter told us that the ministry of education had decided to give every new building air con i wispered to my friend ,  
finally and she said to respond apropriatly.

eportfolio - reading term 1

Camp reflection

WAINUI CAMP, 2018

What is your best memory of Tōtara camp?

- Having dinner with my friends while watching the sun set through the windows
Wainui is one of the best places to go to watch the sunset so far on my list, its nice
to just relax and eat dinner with your friends and just catch up on everything.

What challenged you on camp and how did you get through this challenge?

- When we did high ropes I couldn't reach the top of the ladder and it frustrated me alot
but my friends and instructors made me feel better about it and i tried once more and i got
it.

How did you show Active Listening on camp and why was it important?
- i showed active listening when we were in the hall and dining area by reminding my self over and over don't talk over the teachers/instructors, it is very important in camp to listen to your instructors during activities because of health and safety reasons

My letter to Mr Hipkins

Kaiapoi North School
278 Williams St
Kaiapoi 7630 

Ministry of education 

Government buildings 

Wellington 

Tue 20th Feb

Dear Mr Hipkins
My name is Sophie Renee and I attend Kns
I am writing this letter to you because the heat in our Tiwai senior hubs have been very humid.
And since you are such a great person we knew we could come to you for this small favor.
Approximately 136 children run into class from a scorching hot lunchtime.
All hot all sweaty and have to squish onto the mat all hot all sweaty and all want some fresh air.

Air conditioning would help us learn more and the heart wouldn't bother us. on that note i would like to thank you for listening.
Yours sincerely,

Sophie Renee

Sophie’s week 3 reflection

Tōtara Weekly Reflection Term:               Week:

Some work I am proud of… (add evidence and a brief explanation)

i am proud of my draft letter . The hot sun is killing all of us so we came up with the brilliant idea to write a letter to a man who works with the leader of the labor party-Mr Hopkins

This week was my first session of music, it was...

Exiting and over all fun we learnt how to use a ukulele and we were cutting and colouring two ice creams to show the differences between types of music

What challenged me over the last week and why?

I would have to say writing even though I love writing this week in writing I had a few things that were in my way for instance - one day I got sick and it slowed me down from my learning mostly my writing there were a few things I missed

How did I overcome these challenges or what do I need to do to overcome them in the future?

I think A way I could overcome this problem is to  stay up to date with my learning and ask questions when I need the help

What is my personal goal for next week? To use more active listening and finishing thingbefore the teacher s

To use more active listening when in class and even at home and to  finish work in a sertain period of time

This fortnights Tōtara goal was active listening and I achieved/showed this by...

Looking at the teacher and not talking to friends when it’s not a good time

Sophie's Week 2 Reflection

Tōtara Weekly Reflection Term:               Week:

Some work I am proud of… (add evidence and a brief explanation)

I'm proud of My insta class #Hapiness  caption

What challenged me over last two weeks?

Mathmatics  because in the rotations espeisaly the rich maths tasks

How did I overcome these challenges or what do I need to do to overcome them in the future?

get help from people around me ask questions dont be afraid to get things wrong

What is my personal goal for next week?

to make more progress in the stations that im elected to!

This fortnights Tōtara goal was greetings and I achieved/showed this by...

helping others that are in need of help

All about me

Who is in my family/whanau?

My mum : Leonie

Dad : Steven

Sisters: Phoebe, Iisha, Lindsey

Brother: Thomas

What are my favourite things to do in my own time?

Browse the interwebs, do my nails, look up baby videos,  hang out with friends

What do you like to do at school?

Hang out with my friends. I like reading and writing.

What would I like to improve and make progress with this year?

Probably maths and get better with neat handwriting

What helps you learn?

My teachers supporting me

What stops you learning?

Chatting to much

Who are my friends at school?

Sophia Olivia Aleah etc

What was the best part of the holidays?

Moving in to my Dad's house